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This feels so beautifully stream-of-consciousness. It reminds me of how I would like to write when I’ve sat down with my journal but my mind is so full and scattered I just stare at the blank page.

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wow that means a lot for me to hear :') thank you!

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What resonates for me is the idea of moving in a slipstream in a crowd. I’ve experienced this in crowded streets and subways walking in New York, London, Tokyo, Paris, a Milan, Rome and other places. It doesn’t happen when the sidewalks aren’t crowded. When I first get to a place where everyone walks in the left rather than the right such as Tokyo, it takes me a day or so to adjust so I merge seamlessly. You can spot those who don’t fit and they stand out for thst even more than their gaudy tourist attire. I think some people never learn how to draft, a term I’ve seen used to refer to cars who follow inside another vehicles slipstream on the road. I think people travel the same way, both physically and metaphorically, some cresting a slipstream and some drafting along in thst if others, with many changing from one to the other as needed.

I’ve never experienced memories while moving this way in a crowd but I have felt like I was part of the place while doing so. That’s what struck me here.

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thank you, I'm glad the movement I'm describing is familiar to you :) I felt this energy even when not many people were around, like the slipstreams lingered. it was really cool

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This piece holds so much nostalgia both through your writing and my own memories of visiting NYC. I also relate to the adjustment of going back home after being in the rhythm of another place.

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thank you for sharing :) after I visited I understood why people write about NYC in the romantic kind of ways I've seen!

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